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love is a slave to war -

the dying flames and the wood towers

the hails of our demise;

 

looking for time’s heart

her sweet nightingale virus spreads

lightening the abyss to break it

 

you desire me to be transparent

always wishing i wasn’t sober

gracefully played by the liar

 

but reflections never lie, harsh truths are all you see

to conceive a rainbow astray

 

and all light is less than nothing

torn from your desires, stripped naked

when immortals die

 

as i lay crippled in the dark

…i’m…not used…to being…afraid…

A 'mash-up' poem using lines written by my lovely boyfriend, *JoshuaDavidRobinson :heart: Check out the rest of his gallery: joshuadavidrobinson.deviantart… :D

The title is a medical term literally meaning 'broken heart syndrome'.

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MariaB9 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you do! :heart:
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MariaB9 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome! :hug:
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JoshuaDavidRobinson Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what a lovely little construction you've made here my dear :rose:
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: Thank you; without your work it wouldn't have been possible.
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PS3ACGamer Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student
This one is really cool too. Did he see it and/or like it?
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hasn't seen it yet, but he thought it was a rather cool idea. I gave him the link, but he's been busy. You know how work is.
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PS3ACGamer Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student
Yeah, I know, I know.
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hypermagical Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
:iconawwwplz: Wow, I have two favorite bits:

"looking for time’s heart

her sweet nightingale virus spreads

lightening the abyss to break it"

and

"as i lay crippled in the dark

…i’m…not used…to being…afraid…" <gah, just so good. :XD:
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you so much! :D :heart:
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