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Your absence isn't the elephant in the room;
It’s the invisible parasites lounging in the floorboards
Just writhing for a taste of lonely flesh.

My repaired left half is gone;
Without you, I’m faulty once more:
The half-blind broken wind-up doll is here again.

There aren't words to describe the emptiness:

just return soon.
A friend of mine has to be gone for a while. I'm obviously not taking it well, but I'll adjust.

I miss him. Terribly.

EDIT 7/15/13: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE DLD!! :D He'll be ecstatic to learn that he helped me with this!
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fernknits Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You have really captured the pain of missing someone.  Totally deserved the DLD.
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, wow, thank you so much! :tighthug:

Thank you very much for faving this as well! :huggle:
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just WOW!
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: Thank you so much!! :tighthug:
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Fiaell Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's so vivid and dark. It drew an image of me sitting with my hands on my head on the floor of my newly empty apartment with the things she left. I love it!
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you!! :tighthug: I'm glad you were able to relate! 
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hypermagical Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
:heart::heart::heart: I can't believe I'd never read this before. :faint:

"Without you, I’m faulty once more:
The half-blind broken wind-up doll is here again." Gorgeous. 
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: Thanks so much, Munira!! :tighthug: :heart:
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hypermagical Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
You are so welcome! :la: :heart: :huggle:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013   General Artist
congratulations on the DLD, dear heart and sure hope you're feeling better :cuddle: :heart:
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